The 3-second hook rewrite: a 5-pass checklist
Your first 3 seconds decide the swipe. Rewrite the opening line through these passes.
— Pass 1: cut every word before the verb. 'So today I'm gonna show you' is dead weight
— Pass 2: front-load the payoff or the conflict ('This editor cost me $0 and beat Premiere')
— Pass 3: add a visual that contradicts the words — pattern interrupt
— Pass 4: read it out loud in 2 seconds. Too long? Cut again
— Pass 5: make sure the spoken hook and the on-screen text aren't identical
No tool needed — this is a notepad job before you ever open an editor.
Verdict: write 3 hooks, film all 3, keep the one that makes YOU not swipe. Not for people who 'wing the intro'.
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The 3-second hook rewrite: a 5-pass checklist
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