Your pitch is a wall of text

Your pitch is a wall of text
Five dense paragraphs, no breaks. Editor opens it on their phone, sees a brick, archives it. Doesn't matter how good the idea was — they never reached it.

Format the pitch to be skimmed in 8 seconds:
— Line 1: the specific hook (a post of theirs)
— Line 2-4: three titles, one line each
— Line 5: one sentence on why you (proof)
— Done. Under 100 words.

I rewrote my pitch from 6 paragraphs to 5 short lines and replies went up noticeably. Nobody reads your brick. White space is a tactic. Trim it.