<b>The round number was killing the open</b>
Let me tell you what happened with a finance Short. The hook was <i>"I saved $10,000 in a year."</i> Flat. 41% retention at three seconds, which for this account meant the video was dead on arrival.
Here's the thing — $10,000 reads as a slogan, not a fact. Your brain files round numbers under "ad." So we changed one digit.
New hook: <i>"I accidentally saved $9,400 last year and didn't notice until April."</i>
Same story. The result: three-second retention jumped to 68%, and the video crossed 240k views against a baseline of ~30k.
The odd, specific number signals a real receipt behind it. "Accidentally" and "didn't notice" add a person.
The principle: round numbers feel sold, jagged numbers feel true. When you have a real figure, resist the urge to clean it up.
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<b>The round number was killing the open</b>
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